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This is a pretty great story really! Quite different but a good kind of different โ˜บ๏ธ I love how she's so brace and willing to go for what she wants โœจ
PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS by @wiktoria.episode !!
Go read it guys! ๐Ÿ‘Œ
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I just published episode 8 of my story " four's a crowd". Go check it out and leave any feedback you have, link is in my bio ๐Ÿ˜‡ #episodeinteractive #episodereview #episode #chooseyourstory

โ€ผ๏ธWARNING: THIS REVIEW IS NOT MEANT TO BE HARMFUL, OFFENSIVE, OR DAMAGING! I ONLY WANT TO HELP YOU IMPROVE!โ€ผ๏ธ
โ€ขthis review is based off of the first three chapters
โ€ขplot: (10/10) I absolutely love the idea of the plot! It's unique and interesting! I can't wait to read more!
โ€ขspot directing: (8/10) Overall, your spot directing was pretty good and I can tell that you did a lot with speech bubbles! There were a couple issues with layering though. โ€ขchapter length: (5/10) The chapters were pretty short. โ€ขchoices: (10/10) Just from the first 3 chapters, I can already tell that my choices matter! And I loved that O could customize my character!
โ€ขgrammar: (8/10) The biggest issue was that instead of using the word and you would use the & symbol. โ€ขoverall opinion: (8/10) Overall, I really enjoy the idea of the plot and you did an amazing job incorporating choices! The biggest issue was concerning the chapter length. I can't wait for you to release chapter 4! #episodeinteractive #episodereview #episode #episodewriter #episodelife

"The Book of Life"
@floralepisodes
The book of life is a fantasy story set in an alternate reality in the near future. 2030 to be exact. Computers pedict and/-Or dictate the future. One girl named Alice (I beleive) is labeled an anomaly and sentenced to death. While awaiting her sentence. A group of former anomalies and Allies help her escape. She then begins to see the world from a different point of view. It's a really great story idea and I found myself interested very quickly. The chapter length was ok. I think it was chapter 2 or 3 seemed a little short to me. The rest of the chapters seemed good! It's filled with adventure, and romance a touch of suspense. If you like a good love triangle you'll be in for a treat also. This ones writtened by an already well established author in the Episode community. Be sure to check out her Episode page for a list of her other great stories. #episode #episodereview#episodelife #episodefantasy #episoderecommendation #episodelife

This story is called "Prison Life" by @travaughnepisode , overall I really like the storyline and it's a great story! Keep up the great work! โค๏ธ (DETAILED REVIEWS ARE SENT TO THE AUTHORS VIA INSTAGRAM MESSAGE) #episodestory #episodereview #episodeinteractive

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U guys know na...jb me boht happy hoti hu wid episode to review deti hun ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
so lets start ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
em sooo happy wid today's episode ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ after ages #Swasanians episode tha..๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
#Swasan ka pyar ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ its magical...automatically smile ajati ha face per ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ start se end tk swasan hi #swasan the...love u @rajabetasharad atleast hume ages k bad khush kia ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ swasan love talk ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ jst wow...judaai ka feel unhe b tha..๐Ÿ˜ƒ So swara kavya k ghr ati ha...kartik k peeche..n sanskar plot pe kavya ko dhundne..bt kavya apne bole bhai karthik k sath hoti ha...they thought swara plot pe hogi...๐Ÿ˜‰ bt #Swasan unse do kadam.aage hain.๐Ÿ˜ƒ n i just loved it...d way swara said..me akeli nh hu...q k us k sath sanskar tha ๐Ÿ˜ ye ha swasan ka jaadu ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘Œ then swara sanskar ko cal krti ha...n sb batati hai...jb tk sanskar aye...kia muqabla krti ha dono villain ka humari swara ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰ @hellyshahofficial u rocked ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ u r sherni of television.๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ thn swara dono ko dande se mar k unko lock krti ha n police ko cal krti hai...us k bad swasan hug ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ hight light of d episide...shooo cutee๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ phr police ati ha...sanky chhip.jata ha...pr kavya n kartik r too smart...bach jate hain...lekin kb tk...ye plan to flop hua...lekin episode super hit hua ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ now promo is kartik police ko cal krta ha..n kehta hai sanskar jail me nh h...ao chek kr lain..police jati h chek krne ragini bhaagne ki koshish krti ha..phr use pakar lete hain..n lockup me daal dete hain...uska face chek kr k dekh raye hain infront of kartik k sanskar hai ya nh...n em sure jb ragini bhag rai hogi tb light off hogai hogi...n sanskar apni jagah pe wapis...q k ye sanskar ha...100 dimagh hain hero k pas...n in helly's iv jb wo rasgulla khilane jati ha sbko to sanky police station me hi hota ha..ragini b...so its clear..sanskar kisi trha wapis aega..r kartik ka mun hoga kaala ๐Ÿ˜œ
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๐ŸšจWARNING: This review is based off of my own opinion. It has not been written in spite nor have I let external factors change my outcome. This review is meant to encourage the author and in no means anything other than that ๐Ÿšจ - Author ๐Ÿ‘ซย  @sinead_nicolex - Title ๐Ÿ““ My Criminal - Genre ๐Ÿ”Romance - CC? ๐Ÿ‘ฉ๐Ÿผโ€๐ŸŽค No ----------------------- - Plot๐ŸŽฅ 6/10
ย There is a very descriptive description for this story... "The most fierce dangerous man alive wants something from you or your family. Is it revenge, money or something else?" However I did need to rephrase a couple of words for it to make sense. :) such as want instead of what.

This is no big deal and wont affect your story, just wanted to let you know.

As mentioned the plot itself was descriptive, however I couldn't help by nudge the feeling of a clichรฉ. There is absolutely nothing wrong with a clichรฉ story. TBH they are primarily what I read. - Length of episodes๐Ÿ“ 6/10

The first 4 episode's read were of a lovely little length. Not every story needs to be 30mins long so I am happy with the length :) - Grammar๐Ÿ“ 5/10

Due to a factor disclosed to me via dm with the author, I was not really worried so much about the spelling or grammar of the story.

I can however see that you tried your best and any grammatical errors which were found did not impact the store at all.

I would however have a glance back over and add a couple fullstops and capital I's.

I would suggest downloading Grammly it is a free app you can use in your web browser which will autocorrect and help you out with layout, grammar, spelling and homophones.
I personally used it thoughtout my univeristy degree and found it of great help.
- Character development๐Ÿ’๐Ÿป 5 /10
We were very quickly thrown into action with this story, where I felt that maybe it could of been slowed down to include a little more development.

We have learnt a fraction about the lives of MC and her family, alongside Kai. I just wish thereย  was a little bit more. For example it is not until late in episode one that we are told about being in the mafia.We are introduced to friends, boyfriends of the MC, but it would of been nice for a little more info
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Review: First Love, Last Love? By @sarahepisode29 โ€ขThe story line is good and I love the personalities of all the characters! โ€ขThere's some drama between characters that makes you have a good laugh! โ€ขGrammar is good for English being her second language. โ€ขA handful of directing errors that can be easily fixed, just go through your episodes and you'll find them! โ€ขOverall a good story and I would definitely recommend it to a friend! #episodelife #episode #episodestory #episodeinteractive #episodereview

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Hayden Braveheart is so freaking adorable omg I'm totally in love with him and this story๐Ÿ˜ I NEED MORE PASSES ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ BAD FOR MY HEART by @mb.writer.episode !! #episode #episodereader #episodereview #episodeinteractive #badformyheart

BOOKWORM
By: @aidenm.stories
Bookworm is a really creative story idea, very original ...like none other that I've seen on episode before. The MC is a bit of a Bookworm. She's teased at school, doesn't quite see eye too eye on life with her mother. To top it off she lost he father some years before. She like so many of us, finds her escape through books. One day the characters from the different fantasy realms in her books begin to appear in real life, and try to coax her into helping them save the fantasy realms. On top of that there is a surprise twist that I won't give away! This story isn't what I expected and I was quite pleasantly surprised ๐Ÿ˜Š it held my attention from chapter one. The author is great at character building, has a wild imagination and knows how to weave a wonderfully engrossing tale. I loved it and if your a fantasy lover, I think you'll love it too! First chapter is always pass free so give it a try. ๐Ÿ˜ don't forget to vote for reviewer of the year -----------------------------------------------------'--------------------------ใ€‹ใ€‹ใ€‹ On this webpage: https://epyawards.wixsite.com/epystarawards

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๐ŸฆŽThis review is by no means meant to be rude, discouraging, or humiliating. I am only trying to help the author improve on their work. Review based off of 3 chapters. ๐ŸฆŽ -Nikita
Title: Roman Holiday
Author: episode_ember
Plot: Your plot is really good for the story, very suitable. It drives home on the main aspect of the story, which is the road trip with Noah. Again, it ends on a question which gives the plot a driving force to focus on.
Grammar/Spelling: I did seem some errors here. For the most part the sentence structure was great, what I found was mostly small spelling mistakes that are easily missed when re-reading the same thing in the portal. Picture 2 has three screenshots together because it is all the same mistake. Yours should not have an apostrophe as it is possessive in itself. In picture 3.1 I think you just added an extra s in ass. 3.2 You put wee instead of were. 3.3 This was the only valedictorian that I saw misspelled but I would double check the others. I'm 99.9% sure this is the only place but there's always that 10th of a percent. 4.1 You forgot the I before the !? 4.2 You forgot the o in your. 4.3 You accidentally put two u's in you rather than an ou. 5.1 I think properly it would be We have got to... or We've got to. 5.2 I had this for two reasons. The I might, I do not believe fit in the response from the MC. I cannot remember what MC said before unfortunately but I believe 'Maybe' would have fit better. 5.3 You put a parenthesis which I'm sure you meant to put a question mark. Again, nothing too major.
Choices: You had quite a few that were really good. I don't think you use the point system so the choices do not effect the outcome but you have a mixture of branching (semi-complex that will result in different outcomes) and simple ones. Along with a couple of dressing choices. I like the variety.
Chapter length: I think they were good lengths for the first three chapters, especially since this looks to be your first story. I would suggest making them a little longer when you continue on but for starter chapters I think they were average on the longer side.
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One of the longest episodes I have made and still writing ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿผ I hope you all like the upcoming episode 11 of A Stabbed Vow should be out by late tonight โค๏ธ #episodereview #epsidoeapp #episodeinteractivechooseyourstory #episodelife #episodestory

Hmmmmmmmmmmmph!!! 2 people D.M. me! Who should play Monica? #Left or #Right ??? I am torn!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ ..........
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Here's my cover story edit for a contest! The style looks simple and I left the middle of the cover in blank because thats where you will see the play button when u go into the episode app. Please let me know how I did! ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ
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Sorry I took way longer than I thought ๐Ÿ˜…๐ŸฆŽThis review is by no means meant to be rude, discouraging, or humiliating. I'm only trying to help the author improve on their work. Review based off of 3 chapters. ๐ŸฆŽ -Nikita
Title: Antichrist
Author: @dj.official.writes
Plot: You did a wonderful job describing the plot in such a little space given. You give a synopsis and leave a mysterious feeling that entices readers to read. Personally, I love leaving it on a question because it usually means it will highlight the plot. But again, that's just my personal opinion. You included every important part to the story and you can do a lot with this. The fact that you incorporate a prologue I think adds to the plot description. You have a good starting point and the rest of the plot transitions nicely.
Grammar/Spelling: I think diction should go here as well. So let us start there. Your descriptions are PHENOMENAL. The way you use words to bring in emotions and just... (I evidently do not have incredible diction๐Ÿ˜‚) I'm at a loss. You really draw people in with words. Moving to grammar/spelling I only saw one error (picture 2). There are two side by side pictures because it's the same error. I believe the men are referring just to the pregnant woman, so it should be woman versus women.
Choices: There were not a lot of choices. I think it was on the fewer side but since chapter one was a prologue and some of it was backstory so that's understandable. Plus the first three chapters, after reading chapter 3, I realize or more so as pilot chapters and there will probably be more choices later on. That being said, it is revealed at the end of chapter 3 choices do matter which I, personally, think really clinches a reader on a story. I also LOVE how you add the option to skip scenes that mention violence, have flashes, sudden movements, etc. You obviously care about your readers and I think this should be included in every story to cater to those who cannot always handle certain aspects of a story.
Chapter length: I think they were a little on the short side but semi-average. You addressed at the end of chapter 3 the chapter lengths from 4 on will be based upon decisions.
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*REVIEW*
BRAZEN by @joanofepisode
A gang story where the woman are more badass than the men!
While the gang related stories have become more popular on episode, they seem to get better and better. This is the rare one where the women are more feared and respected in the gang world, and itโ€™s interesting to see the differences, and I like it.
Violet is the female Trey Bailey... Maybe even worse (by that I mean better)than Trey Bailey... Can I say that?
However, this story is focused on Cynthia, Violetโ€™s daughter who has been brought up in the Mafia, but wishes for a simpler life, however that doesnโ€™t mean she isnโ€™t a badass gang member and does her best to get her jobs done.
I already am so intrigued by this story, after only three Chapters so much has happened and itโ€™s exiting, itโ€™s 100% all the time, and you really can tell how much work the writer has done to make sure everything is perfect. The grammar is good, the pans, the zooms are all on point, it is a very good start to a very exiting story, and I know for sure I will continue to read this story.
I rate this story 10/10 โญ๏ธ #episode #episodereviews #episodeinteractive #episodegame #episodereview #episodegangstories

The Princess and the Popstar, by @elena6_episode The Princess and the Pop star
Which one is which?
First off, points for having the same MC name as mine in Witness (Elena, itโ€™s a great name)
Before I was asked to write this review I decided to relive my childhood and watch The Parent Trap, so I love a long lost sister story.
Upon moving to a New City, Selena gets mistaken for pop star, Elena and then stumbles across the real pop-star.
I think the back story is good, about why these girls were separated at birth, it did have The Parent Trap vibe going on. I love how they were instantly best friends when they met, but have no idea they are indeed related, itโ€™s kind of comedic and it did make me giggle at points.
It has the right amount of drama, and a character we love to hate (Mia) gosh what a bitch!
This story has a good use of sound, and the grammar, pans, zooms are also on point.
I love how these girls are so close, and I love most of the characters and they just get stronger as the story goes on. After the first few chapters you can tell you got more into this story and the story does gradually get better. I think at some point, editing will be a good idea, especially in the first few chapters. I think the reaction of Selena and Elena when they first meet should be more shock, because they didnโ€™t seem to be bothered that they looked exactly the same (depending on how you created the characters) thatโ€™s my only note on that.
I think itโ€™s a great story and I will continue to read on.
I would give this a rating of 7/10. #episodereviews #episode #episodeinteractive #episodereview #episodestory

It's so adorable when Hayden shows his softer side to Olivia ๐Ÿ˜ ANDDDD this is a really really good story so far! Great directing & sounds & plot!! BAD FOR MY HEART by @mb.writer.episode โœจ
If you haven't read it, read it now!! โ˜บ๏ธ
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Swipe right!!! I need help from my readers. Hmmph. Who is Monica and Paige celebrity look alike/ "actresses"?? D.M. me your thoughts and pictures and whoever is first AND I approve their actress, they will get a personal shoutout on my page and they will get a shout out in chapter 10 of "ATG"! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ’–โœจ

Sophie's reveal!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
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Thank you for your shoutout @episode_addict_ I'm glad you loved it and stay tune for many more episodes to come ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿผ #episodereview #epsidoeapp #episodeinteractivechooseyourstory #episodelife #astabbedvow

Next script for lady wifi is complete and I'm finally done with volume one. I hope @carriekeranen isn't disappointed. And I have a message for the cast of miraculous @cristinavox @brycepapenbrook @themelalee @maxmittelman @ezraweisz @keithsilverstein I'm sorry I couldn't make it to San Diego comic con and meet you guys. I wish you guys had fun, and hopefully I'll see you in the future. Stay miraculous.
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