Here is EWB's review for The Anarchy Wanderers by @catherine1.episode! 📚
Plot: The plot isn't that unique, as there are many stories on Episode like this, but the author has added a few twists which makes it more interesting. A handsome man, an amazing date and a kidnapping, all in one which was a great idea. There is one thing we found a bit odd, though. The MC is a doctor, but yet she has time to hang out whenever she wants, even though doctors are incredibly busy.
Language and Grammar: There wasn't really many major errors, however there were a lot of missing periods and a few grammatical errors. We recommend that you proofread your story in advance, or there are some wonderful IG accounts that offer proofreading services (one of our members, @karina.writes, has also recently started her own)! We will be sending you some screenshots of errors that we can find, though.
Directing: The directing was okay, though there were a couple of glitches (one of our members noticed that in the kissing scene in episode 2, the MC is kissing but Juice isn't playing along!). There were also a few issues with panning and spot directing.
Other Comments: The length of an episode is a little bit short. We understand how much time you must be already putting in them, but it would be great if you could make them slightly longer. Sometimes, we noticed that the animations didn't really match the dialogue, which, in addition were a little choppy at certain bits.
Overall Opinion: The story isn't too bad nor very good. It has a lot of potential, though, and if you put more time into this story we're sure that this story can be a lot better. We look forward to reading your story when you have released more chapters! ❤️ #episodereview