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STORY REVIEW
« Supermums » by @episode.misslxox
Description by the author : « Three singles mums who also are undercover super heroes but it isn’t easy when someone’s after them and their children! »
This review is based on the first two chapters.

PLOT 🌿 9/10
This story is very original.  I never seen something like this before.
CHARACTERS 🌿 7/10
You introduced well your characters, but only the ‘mom’ side.  I would love to know more about the ‘super’ side. Do they have super powers?  Is there a specific reason why they became the supermums?  And when was the moment they decided to form that group?  This part seems a little more confusing to me.  I love the fact that there’s three moms and three little girls.  It’s cute and charming.  Maybe the villain should be more villain?  I didn’t really believed that she was a threat.
SPELLING & GRAMMAR 🌿 5/10
There’s misspellings and some misprints, but what I really recommend you is to use ponctuation.  It’s very, very important.  It will help the reader to better understand what you mean and it looks more finished.
DIRECTING🌿 5/10
Pretty good!  You sometimes forgot to make your character talks when they talk, but that’s no big deal.  I don’t remember seeing glitch, which is nice.  There’s no choices in the first two episodes.  Readers love interactions, you could add some. 💗

OVERALL 🌿 26/40
This story is great, you have for sure a lot of imagination and it’s a pretty important quality to have for a writer.  My advices for you is to review the spelling and the grammar of your text and to explain a little more about what is it to be a supermum.  Don’t be afraid to make the villain super villain.  Make us hate her!  Make us be afraid of what she could be capable of.  Keep it up girl, you’re doing nice work!
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I just published episode 8 of my story " four's a crowd". Go check it out and leave any feedback you have, link is in my bio 😇 #episodeinteractive #episodereview #episode #chooseyourstory

🚨WARNING: This review is based off of my own opinion. It has not been written in spite nor have I let external factors change my outcome. This review is meant to encourage the author and in no means anything other than that 🚨 - Author 👫 @h.noelle.episode - Title 📓Blood Wars - CC? 👩🏼‍🎤 No - Genre 🔍 Fantasy - Description ⁉ "Raised under Vampire royalty can Kara break free of expectations or will the influence of a human boy destory her plans?"
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I typically dont read fanstay stories, only when they have been suggested. However I did enjoy this!
Your story is not your A- typical vampire story, it a little bit more than that! There is something about it which is just unique. - Length of episodes📏 10/10
I did enjoy the length of your chapter's, maybe if they were a just a little bit longer they would of been perfect! - Grammar📝 10/10
There are no grammatical errors in which I can find within your story. :) It is very nicely written
. - Character development💁🏻 9/10
You have started off chapter 1 with given us a background into the vampire group the 'Dociles'
We have also met Kara and her family, there were some funny vampire/dark pun's thrown around when introduced to them... some in which I actually giggled at.

We have also learnt that Kara has a complete different ideology to her parents, something which you have narrated brilliantly

We have also learnt about supporting charcters backgrounds and their lives before being  vampires. - Choices and Directing⚖ 8/10
There was a large and beautiful aray of directing within this story. There are basic directing shots throughout the story such as panning and zooming, alongside some lovely spot directing.

You have also used custom backgrounds!!! I love a custom background as it adds that personal touch to a story.
There were some choices throughout the story, some in which I feel may of had an outcome if the actual story espically thoses in chapter 6. - Overall percentage💯 45/50
I happily have given you a 45/50. This is equivalent to a 9/10. I really enjoyed this vampire story.
Well done

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Ahh 578 omg thank you thank you everyone who reads my story it might still be at 500s but we are getting there! #episodeinteractive #episodereview #epsidoeapp #episodeinteractivechooseyourstory

‼️WARNING: THIS REVIEW IS NOT MEANT TO BE HARMFUL, OFFENSIVE, OR DAMAGING! I ONLY WANT TO HELP YOU IMPROVE!‼️
•this review is based off of the first three chapters
•plot: (10/10) I absolutely love the idea of the plot! It's unique and interesting! I can't wait to read more!
•spot directing: (8/10) Overall, your spot directing was pretty good and I can tell that you did a lot with speech bubbles! There were a couple issues with layering though. •chapter length: (5/10) The chapters were pretty short. •choices: (10/10) Just from the first 3 chapters, I can already tell that my choices matter! And I loved that O could customize my character!
•grammar: (8/10) The biggest issue was that instead of using the word and you would use the & symbol. •overall opinion: (8/10) Overall, I really enjoy the idea of the plot and you did an amazing job incorporating choices! The biggest issue was concerning the chapter length. I can't wait for you to release chapter 4! #episodeinteractive #episodereview #episode #episodewriter #episodelife

"I'm pickle Rick!" This episode is just ridiculous in the best ways...to describe everything that happens won't do it justice...definitely one of the series' best! #rickandmorty #adultswim #picklerick #episodereview #tvseries

Lone Wolves Part. 2
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Great story I like the best friends topic because that happens a lot in real life keep up the good work I'll def read more 🙌🏼😊
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Good story has it's little mystery in it can't wait for the next episode @episode.glasses #episodeinteractive #episodereview #episodeinteractivechooseyourstory

Are you guys ready?!! I don't know if I am! Lol Comment below, what are you doing to get ready?

OMG! Thank you very much, guys, for 250 reads!😱 I'm happy!🎉🙌🏻 ❤️ you!
Episode 5 is coming soon!🙌🏻
Read my story "The Princess and the Prophecy"!☺️🔮🏰
The link is in my bio👆🏻You won't regret!😉
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🚨WARNING: This review is based off of my own opinion. It has not been written in spite nor have I let external factors change my outcome. This review is meant to encourage the author and in no means anything other than that 🚨 - Author 👫 @Ramones.episode - Title 📓 Cassie - CC? 👩🏼‍🎤Yes as the author has stated - Genre 🔍 Drama - Description ⁉"Everyone hides their struggles. Will Cassie embrace the twists of trouble or will secrets ruin her plans? You decide!"
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- Plot🎥 8.5 /10
I found the plot of "Cassie" different, every character has there own backstory and mystery behind them. I cannot wait for more - Length of episodes📏 9 /10
All the chapters I read have had a great length to them :) - Grammar📝 9.5/10
The grammar was fine, not perfect but who's is lol. The story was still readable and in no way did any errors deter the read. - Character development💁🏻 8/10
From the get go we have been introduced to Cassie, her brother and her father. We can sense a tension between the family with the ides that the brother doesnt visit as often as he should.

I love how you added a half-customisation it helps the author feel connected to their image of the character but also helps the reader.
I do think that I am learning more and more about Cassie as the story goes on - Choices and Directing⚖9 /10
Your directing was very very very well done. I did notice any part where the character was wrongly spotted. The panning, zooming, transitions etc were also fabulously done!!!
On the case of choices, you were able to include many! These made me feel very involved and in tune with the storyline. - Overall percentage💯 44/50

The 44/50 given is the same as a 9/10

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Have ya'll checked out "The Teardrop" by @shiney.episode ??? Its pretty good!!! Show her some love!! 🌟@shiney.episode 🌟@shiney.episode 🌟@shiney.episode 🌟@shiney.episode
You won't be disappointed! 😉😍❤

Thank you @episodians_united for your review of Angie is a PunK! 🎸
Sorry for those minor glitches, I tested and tested and I can't reproduce them 😩 If someone sees a glitch in my story please let me know! Thanks in advance! Xoxo
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SLAYER
By: @amepisode
I decided to put aside my requests for an evening and spent last night reading a story I've had on my to read list for a while, "Slayer" by @amepisode. It didnt dissapoint. It was so well done it was almost like I was watching a TV series. Her directing was good right from the start, and by the 6th episode she improved even more. She also has another story published on the app called "Can Love Srike" and "Slayer" is her second. Each lengthy chapter ends with a suspenseful cliffhanger or shocking twist. Your choices matter and determine quite a bit of the story. Its a polished and well written story with a really unique take on the vampire genre, empowering the women, rather than makig her fall in love with a vampire at first sight. She's a badass protagonist with a hilarious personality. (The writer seems to be a talented comic also😂)this story will leave you wanting more no matter what age you are or genre you prefer, it's got a bit of something for everyone. Xoxo
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Ahh 578 omg thank you thank you everyone who reads my story it might still be at 500s but we are getting there! #episodeinteractive #episodereview #epsidoeapp #episodeinteractivechooseyourstory

What happened? Why is Richard leaving? Where is Adele?
You'll know in episode 5 of "The Princess and the Prophecy"!☺️🔮🏰 It's coming soon☺️
The link is in my bio👆🏻You won't regret!😉
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Writing again!
Update: I'M BACK - EPISODE 6 WILL BE OUT SOON ----- Last post:
Hi everyone! I'm planning on writing again! I miss it so much, but I just could not find a way to combine it with my study. But guess what.. I graduated!!!! So now I think I will have more time and I am definitely planning some major changes in my story. Start reading 'The Stalker' and recommend it to your friends!

We reached 600 reads even though I had a break from writing!!! Thanks so much. Love the fans!

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Writing again!
Update: I'M BACK - EPISODE 6 WILL BE OUT SOON ----- Last post:
Hi everyone! I'm planning on writing again! I miss it so much, but I just could not find a way to combine it with my study. But guess what.. I graduated!!!! So now I think I will have more time and I am definitely planning some major changes in my story. Start reading 'The Stalker' and recommend it to your friends!

We reached 600 reads even though I had a break from writing!!! Thanks so much. Love the fans!

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Soooo my very first recommendation is...
"TO BE HUMAN" by the talented JennJam (@tobehuman.episode). I know I don't have many followers, lol, but she definitely deserves MORE reads! Why isn't this story featured already?! I think this was one of the very first #Mystery stories I started playing on #Episode. I first came across it thanks to a quiz by @episodecentral, it was something like "Which Episode story do you belong with?", and, well, the result was To Be Human, which I had never played before. I couldn't agree more, though. Juliet, the main character, reminds me of myself sooo much! Both in her good and bad sides.
If you like Mystery you should definitely play #ToBeHuman, and if you don't, well you should anyway! I promise you that some choices will probably break your heart, you'll get to know some of the characters' backstories, which gives you more of an insight on them and the way they've become what they are. The directing is, of course, super good and I loved (and I bet you will, too) the height difference between the two main characters! Of course there's a love story, you should know I'm romantic to the core, duh! But it's nothing like the usual "bad boy (with a heart of gold) and goody-two-shoes love story". It's much more complicated and deep than that. The story is a perfect mixture of Romance, Mystery, with a bit of Sci-Fi, and lots of twisted minds! 😜 Some cliffhangers and plot twists will probably make your jaw drop, and isn't that what makes us all keep on reading, after all? If you read this story, which I strongly recommend you to do (just in case you hadn't already noticed, duh!) I promise you you'll fall in love with the characters, and you'll probably hate many of them, too. Or, perhaps, you'll find yourself in a love-hate relationship with some of them... but no spoilers! 😂
I'll just finish this recommendation by saying: JennJam deserves to be famous!
The intro to each chapter also features some very very good drawings of the story characters, and that's a bonus! 🎬Vote out of 10: well, that's a 10/10 for me! -
Stay tuned for the next recommendation in September! -
You'll find them all under the hashtag:
#YueliangRecommends

STORY REVIEW
« Supermums » by @episode.misslxox
Description by the author : « Three singles mums who also are undercover super heroes but it isn’t easy when someone’s after them and their children! »
This review is based on the first two chapters.

PLOT 🌿 9/10
This story is very original.  I never seen something like this before.
CHARACTERS 🌿 7/10
You introduced well your characters, but only the ‘mom’ side.  I would love to know more about the ‘super’ side. Do they have super powers?  Is there a specific reason why they became the supermums?  And when was the moment they decided to form that group?  This part seems a little more confusing to me.  I love the fact that there’s three moms and three little girls.  It’s cute and charming.  Maybe the villain should be more villain?  I didn’t really believed that she was a threat.
SPELLING & GRAMMAR 🌿 5/10
There’s misspellings and some misprints, but what I really recommend you is to use ponctuation.  It’s very, very important.  It will help the reader to better understand what you mean and it looks more finished.
DIRECTING🌿 5/10
Pretty good!  You sometimes forgot to make your character talks when they talk, but that’s no big deal.  I don’t remember seeing glitch, which is nice.  There’s no choices in the first two episodes.  Readers love interactions, you could add some. 💗

OVERALL 🌿 26/40
This story is great, you have for sure a lot of imagination and it’s a pretty important quality to have for a writer.  My advices for you is to review the spelling and the grammar of your text and to explain a little more about what is it to be a supermum.  Don’t be afraid to make the villain super villain.  Make us hate her!  Make us be afraid of what she could be capable of.  Keep it up girl, you’re doing nice work!
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THE OFFICE AFFAIR by @elizabethr.episode !
The story is really good actually and I like how your speech bubbles are not so messy and your spelling and grammar is quite flawless ☺️ Oh and I really really love the way you do your choices! It's complex and fun!!!
However, there were some problems with the zooms of certain scenes in Episode 3 I think. The animations and spot directing just needs a little polishing, that's all ☺️
Good job and keep it up ya 💕
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The Black Bra
By: @marie.m.episode
I'm just about to start the 5th chapter of The Black Bra and I read some of Winteberry Grove last night and though very different both of these stories are fantastic. The Black Bra is for a more mature audience, and being 33 myself I think this one's my favorite 💖 It's got more than a few scenes that must have been very tedious for the writer to create and I respect her for that. I wouldn't have the patience! She has taken the bad boy/gang theme that so many love and made it completely her own. Instead of demeaning the woman and have her falling all over some guy or changing herself for him, this story empowers the woman and sends out a positive message. The Black Bra has insanely long episodes! I'm sure many of you will appreciate that. It's serious yet hilarious at times and chock-full of unique and quirky characters. Though it's got a mature theme it's still appropriate for those as young as 13-15 (in my personal opinion) because of the positive message it gives. A smart move for writing an episode story😊 I will post a review of Winteberry Grove in the near future since I haven't read much yet. I can say that it seems like it's going to be just as good as The Black Bra. Xoxo
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did this bitch get a #NoseJob ?

Writing again!
Update: I'M BACK - EPISODE 6 WILL BE OUT SOON ----- Last post:
Hi everyone! I'm planning on writing again! I miss it so much, but I just could not find a way to combine it with my study. But guess what.. I graduated!!!! So now I think I will have more time and I am definitely planning some major changes in my story. Start reading 'The Stalker' and recommend it to your friends!

We reached 600 reads even though I had a break from writing!!! Thanks so much. Love the fans!

#episodeauthor #episodeinteractive #episodenoticeme #episodeinteractivechooseyourstory #episodeedits #episodefam #episodereview #episodecharacters #episodeink

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